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Eternitys' Plea(Inspired by Parkers'-Eterntity My Love)
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Eternitys' Plea(Inspired by Parkers'-Eterntity My Love) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Wait for thee no more, my love, For death shall not rob thee of thy heart, Upon this day I shall say,our souls never depart, For weeping and tears I have cried, Days upon waiting your return, As I lay by your side, My soul cries out in mourn, But Eternity shall not be long enough, Long enough to love you, We are one, our thoughts, our hearts, Such sorrow was I torn, Longing for thee to kiss thy hand, Awaiting, searching across this land, Every day, every hour, I kept my love, My love for you treasured unto paper, These love letters that I write, Every day, every hour, every night, I have gazed into the heavens, Cring with my pleas, Longing for my love to return to me, No more could I take, my heart did break, As my sorrow turned to pain, I left my tears inside a bottle, For you my love, I cried tears like rain, I am left awaiting, for a soul of one cannot be two, I am left bewildered without my love, I am a lost ship at sea, broken and blue, As I lye down beneath this willow tree, I leave my tears, my letters to you, For I shall love you through all eternity. For eternity shall not be long enough for thee, As I sup from poisons cup, All the world shall see, Our love will be set free, This was our plea, Loves' Eternity! (INSPIRED BY PARKERS...ETERNITY MY LOVE!) [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-17-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I can relate to what you are expressing here...I was married to a military man for 10 years....awaiting his return was heartbreaking.....such sweet words you chose thanks for sharing.....  Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
For eternity shall not be long enough for thee, As I sup from poisions cup, All the world shall see, Our love will be set free, This was our plea, wow, excellent poem. thanks for sharing. My soul cries out in mourn, But Eternity shall not be long enough, Long enough to love you, We are one, our thoughts, our hearts, Such sorrow was I torn, Longing for thee to kiss thy hand, ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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DONALD Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 10 |
HEY ROMANTIC HEART, WHENEVER YOU FIND INTIMACY AND BECOME INTIMATE WITH LIFE YOU CONQUER ALL THAT IS TO IT... BY SACRIFICING YOUR TIME AND DEVOTING IT TO A RELATIONSHIP THAT IS NOT DETRIMENTAL TO YOUR HEART.SOMEBODY WITH SUBSTANCE...SOMEBODY WHO WILL WELCOME YOU INTO THEIR WORLD...BECAUSE YOURS IS ALL BOOKED UP. YOUR POEM REMINDED ME THAT LOVE IS GRAND. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Julie.welcome and thanks, I wrote this from the times of Romeo and Julliet, or Robinhood, as if I were a Maiden...it complements Parkers poem...  Brian..so glad you enjoyed it, i appreciate your comments, Happy you read it*smiles** Donald: welcome to Passions,Thanks for thr reply I appreciate you taking time to read! Ps..mine is not booked up... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-16-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Put that poison cup away and keep on writing these very romantic poems. Well done my poet friend well done! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, this was very beautiful, and a wonderful Romeo and Juliet ending. Thank you for the honor to my poem. Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ethome..I will put it away if thee ask,Thanks for you rreply! Parker...You know you inspire me...do thou needst some inspiration?Thanks *smiles** Me glad you liked!!! |
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