»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #8
»
Addiction
| Open Poetry #8 |
|
Addiction |
|
|
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA 
|
Pacing through the room Around and around Talking to myself Just to hear the sound I really, really need some No, no don't think that way Just try to settle down And take it day by day I lay down on the floor Stare at the ceiling fan My thoughts spinning with it I can't take this, oh man! I need some, I need some No, put it out of my mind Take some really deep breaths Everything is going to be fine Okay, okay I can do this I can resist somehow I lied, I can't do it I gotta have some now! I cannot help myself There's nothing I can do No matter how hard I fight I am still addicted to you... Steven Seaman My poems are my hopes, my fantasies and my dreams Created with emotion, imagination and thought Read my words you will know my heart Look in my eyes you can see my soul |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sea_of_okc~ Man do I hear this! This is perfectly expressed.Great job!  -SEA |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh man ...have you been drinking my rasberry tea again LOL well you must be peeking, cause you wrote me in this  they say its mind over matter ... but I dont have a mind ... and it dont seem to matter  i oh so relate to this one have ya tried ...never mind...it dont work either LOL later-got it bad-gator jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
||
|
poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehe You're so funny Steve! I can see you doing this, really I can! And I'm laughing at Janet saying she doesn't have a mind, so it doesn't really matter! ROFL You two seem to be a little uh....off. Yeah, that's it! LOL  Anyways, what in heavens has come over you? Are you okay? LOL I'm worried - is it because uh.....no emails or something? You just lay down and take it easy, ok? I'm almost done with my moving, and then I'll come keep you company, how's that? Sound good? Sheeesh....you're too funny, and btw, this poem is really cute! "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
good poem...very good.....too need not want that is DEEP!! Julie :) |
||
|
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Sea - Nice to know I'm not the only one LOL thanks JM - Dangit!!! Did you spike the tea again???? I HATE when you do that! LMAO Uh.... yeah I got it worse than just bad hon... later-understanding-gator pFF - yes darling it IS b/c I had to go an ENTIRE day w/o my fix  I know, I know, I'm obsessing again... just smack me K?Julie - yes exactly, NEED, although want is certainly part of it also  |
||
|
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hey Sea...... Know what it's like to need a fix! Addiction that can't be defeated!!!! Great poem! ~Sheri |
||
|
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A great poem, much much enjoyed. I'm not addicted I can live with out poetry really I can. No I can't I am weak. lol ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sea,...could so see you there. Of course at first I thought it was about something else....but then towards the end this sleep deprived and weary head of mine caught on.hehe. She must be special. Enjoyed this,...thank you. *Peace. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
