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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Unable to let go with hindsight as my mentor I wonder, drown in listlessness pondering the wheres and whys seeking comfort from dogma. In the middle of nowhere in my land of private obscurity I still love her.... -Rich- -learning is hard without experience- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is "choice". You expressed it perfectly... "drown in listlessness"...painted that emotion for me... nice work here. |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
thank you serenity  I always welcome your comments -Rich- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ok,...I like the title. hehe. It fits....in more ways than one. Goodness,...after and through all that,...you still love her. I do hope getting this out helps...even if just a bit. You write,...I will read.  . You in your world there....pondering,...leaves me here in mine,...pondering. Wishing you Peace. |
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