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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Drifting Sadness creeps around tripping to the ground useless, clinging to chance drifting away in distance. Nobody to anyone important just an animal defiant seeking acceptance by all drifting into free fall. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Free-fall Exhilarates, Brings a Rush in This blood, Thoughts Fleeting Drifting Off sad Shores Into a Wide Ocean Sailing In solitude Calming Sea-line Dolphins Jumping, Visual Delight Another Rush in This blood As I jump Into the water To waltz With Dolphins… Drifted Alone I visited Heaven Paradise Regained, Troubles Drifted Away. ........ Oooopppppppssssssss Sorry for all these words Lost Dreamer...I just drifted with the theme that you came up with and experienced a most enjoyable sail... Thanks... Regards, sudhir |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sudhir: Your sail was enjoyable to me also. Thank you for the enlightenment.  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
good job losty i enjoyed it |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Walt: Thank you kind Sir, glad you enjoyed. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, aching. I've been there. But the idea of free fall is one I've never come up with. Brilliant. Too sad. Too real. Thank you for sharing. Sometimes I need to cry. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
great lines, here, gloria... "just an animal defiant seeking acceptance by all drifting into free fall." crushing, pertinent, very real! Thanks for the read... well done, m'friend! dp |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to these feelings. Well written, Gloria! Denise |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Nobody to anyone important just an animal defiant seeking acceptance by all drifting into free fall. wow...quite sad but beautifully written. excellent poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Gloria, WOW, an explosion of thought bytes, each powerful alone, combined, WOW! Dennis :^) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank you all most kindly for your replies, I appreciate very much. |
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