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notlikely2
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since 2000-06-16
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0 posted 2000-06-16 04:34 AM


I wrote this poem for a very special lady who I met on the net. We fell in love long before we met in person. We sent probably 100 emails every day for weeks and phoned each other 6 or 7 times each day. By the time we met we knew each other better than most married couples ever do.
We now live together and are planning a family.
We are living proof that "Love on The Net" really CAN work!

You love me!

Yes you love me
Yet what I have done to deserve this?
To be in love with you
To me
Is more than heavenly bliss

To feel your naked body
Underneath my fingertips
To taste you and to touch you
With my tongue and with my lips

To see that look of pleasure
Upon your glowing face
As I stroke you, touch you, kiss you
In that very special place

That look is worth a million times
Whatever I possess
But I would part with all of that
For just one more caress

I explore you
Every inch of you
A journey of desire
I cannot halt
This burning flame
I cannot quench this fire

This fire that burns within me
This ache I must address
I need you
I need all of you
I will not suffer less

And you
You feel the same for me
I see it in your eyes
They glow so bright
You need me
I hear it in your sighs


I feel your hair upon my chest
You start to touch me too
Your hands, your arms, your mouth and more
You give me all of you

Each touch unleashes passion
Which never have I known
Our love which started slowly
So rapidly has grown

And soon we are together
Our bodies joined in love
We fit so well together
Like hand inside a glove

This passion,
Oh, such passion
We want for more and more
You wanted me then, and now I find
You need me even more

Your mouth
It brings me ecstasy
Your hands a glowing flame
Your body reaches to me
Now we'll never be the same
Now it's "us", not you, or me,
We truly are as one
Our love may seem a pinnacle
But it's only just begun

And when its time to sleep at last
Still we have to touch
I couldn't bare to leave you
I love you far too much

Morning
As you look at me
Still I see that fire
You reach for me
And I for you
Our bodies racked with true desire
Again you show me
Deep deep love
You give me everything
Our love which seems to grow and grow
Is only just beginning

And darling this is just a part
Of the many ways we show
The purest love within our hearts
This love which daily grows
A touch, a kiss, a look , a word
Each one of these means more
Than all the treasures in the world
Which any man could store

There's only one thing in my life
One thing I want for mine
You know
That's right!
You're all I want
My darling
Caroline



© Copyright 2000 John Ward - All Rights Reserved
notlikely2
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 308
UK
1 posted 2000-06-16 05:26 AM


TO TOUCH YOU

The purest love
I'll ever know
A love which daily, hourly, grows

That is what I feel when I touch your skin

A love that none have known before
A key to open all locked doors
A tear of joy
A smile begins

That is what happens when I touch your skin

Each time I feel a fingertip
A brush of cheeks
A touch of lips
A whisp of hair against my face
I know that I am in my place

This is what I know when I touch your skin

I feel your body so close to mine
Our arms and legs and hearts entwined
I see your eyes
And hear your sighs

I melt
each time I touch your skin


To touch your face
Or kiss your feet
Brings me alive
Makes me complete
There's nothing I need
Or could desire
To hold you quenches any fire

I have everything when I touch your skin


But once I am there
Holding you close
I cannot bear to part
We have but one body, one heart, one soul
Which cannot be torn apart

We are one when I touch your skin

And even if distance is between us
Still we are together
I feel your touch
So gentle
You'll be touching me
Forever


I'm in heaven when I touch your skin

xxx


JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
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2 posted 2000-06-16 10:17 AM


Hot Hot Hot!!! To love like this is truely a blessing....Cherish it above all else...let nothing come between it.....Great work...

 Julie :)

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-06-16 10:25 AM


Notlikely2~ Wow! These are sooooo hot! Great job! BTW~ Welcome!   -SEA
peppermint35
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
4 posted 2000-06-16 10:30 AM


Whew!!!  Excellent work....I guess you were inspired!!!!  

 Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

notlikely2
Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308
UK
5 posted 2000-06-16 10:52 AM


Thanks to JulieAnn, SEA and peppermint35 for your kind comments and the warm welcome.
It's true, I was inspired, by the most beautiful woman in the world!!

 Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

ynotme?
Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17

6 posted 2000-06-18 01:58 PM


WOW! WOW! WOW1
What else can I say???
Such passion.....she must be very special!!!

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
7 posted 2000-06-18 02:03 PM


wow You just my screen on fire. HOT! but all the same very tender. This poem just flows
beautifully written I can see your love is very special and wish you all the best in the future.

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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ynotme?
Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17

8 posted 2000-06-20 03:58 AM


I meant to ask...did you really meet on the net?
whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
9 posted 2000-06-20 04:17 AM


Hot and spicy poem , Congrats on having a wonderful love like this   I wish you all the best in the future with your family  

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
10 posted 2000-06-20 09:18 AM


Wonderful poem, true passion I can tell your are soulmates, lovers and friends
thankyou for making my day

Olias

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