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The 'Two Souls Dance' in the Meeting of my Mind
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The 'Two Souls Dance' in the Meeting of my Mind |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The ‘Two Souls Dance’ In the Meeting of my Mind Shall I curtsey? Will you bow? When the music begins, will love begin now? I shall take your hand, and thus your arm, you will look at me, no hidden charms, and glide we two upon the floor to dance to the strain of music…and more… no words, no words, we shall not converse… just your soul in my green eyes you shall immerse, while your heart strains, so full of delight that I be here, here in your arms for the night… and when the winds blow upon the common and the tomorrow before us yawns, when the night’s twilighted splendor comes just before the dawn when the music’s song is fading when you loose my hand’s hold when the music ends will love begin now? Shall I curtsey? Will you bow? 15 June, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ OH MY!! This is absolutely breathtaking..... loved it!  -SEA |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SPLENDID. thats all I can say cos I am "tongue-tied and twisted, An earth bound misfit, I" (excerpts from Learning to Fly by Pink Floyd) .......... As I gather a few words now, Karilea, this is awesome work... I just wish I could write a response poem to this immediately, but words fail me as I go in a loop again.... may regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, thank you...I am blushing... and Sudhir...I am waiting for your reply... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You captured a beautiful moment ... 'and when the winds blow upon the common and the tomorrow before us yawns, when the night’s twilighted splendor comes just before the dawn' Enjoyed very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Marge...that's what I was going for... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Splendid ...  ) Coco A lovely dance of verse |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Coco... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flowed beautifully Sunshine ... a lovely waltz to my senses, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Kit...it was fun to write... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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