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Open Poetry #8

Walk Right Now

ashley cain
Junior Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 30
Texas

0 posted 2000-06-15 10:50 AM

Walk right now
into the luscious meadows
of hope

Smell the fragrance
that indulges your
senses.

Pleasure your eyes,
little hedonist.

With the wild orchids
of the valley.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-06-15 11:24 AM

Hi Ashley, and welcome to Passions. I like the phrase "luscious meadows of hope" in the first verse of this poem. Your imagery is lovely!

Elizabeth

P.S. It's a good idea to reply to 5-6 other poems before you post your own, and to only post 1 or 2 per day. Just thought I'd let you know that. Anyway, keep on writing!

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-06-15 11:17 PM

Hi Ashley,

Wonderful work here my friend, very much enjoyed and welcome to passions, hope to see more of your poetry.

Cerenity

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