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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA 
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Completion If worlds merged by mere will, never again an awakening chill would round me wrap in fading dream, for we would be -- not merely seem. I close my eyes and know you near. As chaos fades your voice I hear. Desire leads by your warm hand, drawing me into destiny’s plan. With gentle intent your chin I lift, across your lips my mouth I drift. Feel my hand from shoulder slip to trail my path along your hip. Look deeply in my eyes, just see that by your side I wish to be. When memory saddens day again, disheartening soul from within, step into my arms and anchor there. Hear my whisper caress your hair. With tenderness you reach out pulling me from the arms of doubt. I feel you pick me up, dusting away the weariness of a darker day. Into our night serenity slips, quieting with lover’s lips, as gently you bid me know love in me again can grow. EWDrake © 2000 |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
When memory saddens day again, disheartening soul from within, step into my arms and anchor there. Hear my whisper caress your hair. very beautiful words, completed just right..  ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
EWDrake, I have to agree with what Marge said. Your poem was wonderfully written. I can't wait to read more.  Welcome to Passions rosepetals25 |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Maureen, thank you for the welcome. It's always nice to know what lines actually appeal. Nice job with the picture. That I've got to figure out how to do! *S rosepetal25, Now, of course, I jhave to wonder who Marge is.... *S* Thank you for reading and warmly welcoming. Evan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EWDrake~ Hi ... My name is ~*Marge*~ ! I'm a poet-a-holic ! (How'd she do that ?? )  Welcome to Passion's. I can see that you have talent. You're gonna love it here. Enjoyed the render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
~chuckles~ Did I say Marge?.... I meant... Maureen.. lol Ooops  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
hey Rose..I am not so sure Marge likes it but I love being mistaken for her ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Marge, A poet - a - holic, aye? I'm a bit of that myself. Thank you for the colourful greeting, m'lady! I'm very much enjoying getting my feet wet here. There are many, many good poets in this forum...pleasantly challenging...and very wonderful reading! *s* Rosepetals for cheekcolour? Enchanting...laughing... I'm sure both Marge and Maureen understand... *S |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey Evan found your first post here and it is fabulous.... My regards, sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very good Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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