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I think about you.....
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I think about you..... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I think about you........ ----------------------------- When I wake up in the morning with the sunbeams playing gently on my bed.... I think about you........ ----------------------------- When I look at all the letters you have written and all the things that we have said... I think about you........ ----------------------------- When I stand out in the rain, letting the water wash away the tears I cry.... I think about you........ ----------------------------- When I hate myself for loving you, and try to stop, I can't, and don't know why.... ----------------------------- I know you can't be with me, and I know the reason why.... But that doesn't make it easier to stop the tears I cry.... And if I could hold you once, I know you'd leave the life you're in.... You would never leave these loving arms again, my friend.... I think about you........ ----------------------------- When the sun comes up and opens up the dawn.. I think about you........ ----------------------------- When I wander through the day, and the ache I feel inside is growing strong.. I think about you........ ----------------------------- And I can't escape the feelings that are growing in my heart.. Even though I know that in this life, we will always be apart.. And the only way to stop these thoughts is simply not to start........ I think about you..... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny1, Oh my goodness, how many times can you write like this? Such a gentle touch that touched me with these words of yours. If you keep this up I will not be able to come up with the words that I want to say. Just brilliant, I can say no more, except for this; "One Single Red Rose".... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"And the only way to stop these thoughts is simply not to start........" Beautifully written Sunny! Wonderfully wise words to close with ... very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
To constantly think about someone and not be able to be with them is a deep frustrating hurt. You have portrayed the feelings here very well............ "even though I know that in this life, we will always be apart.. And the only way to stop these thoughts is simply not to start... I think about you... That's love if there ever was love....... excellent work......... take care.........ethome........... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill.. You don't know what it means to have you read my work, as I am a great fan of yours......but this is the last one for today....my muse is steering me toward the garden, as that's where I do my best pondering!! Hi Kit... I'm so glad you liked that ending! Now if at times I could only take my own advice!!!!!! ethome... I guess love is something that's hard to turn off......thank you for your input!! Thank you all very much.....< !signature--> ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ I know each word by heart............. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny You certainly have touched my heart with this one. The words are so true and you have written them with so much feeling and emotion. Great work! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SEA......Thank you so much, and I'm glad these are familiar words for you! ddgoose....I'm really glad you liked this, as I enjoyed writing it. Thank you for your reply, too! By the way, welcome to Passions!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I remembered reading this while in a hurry, and meant to go back and give it a good read. Glad I did.. |
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