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She Moves Me
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She Moves Me |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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She floats across the terrace lawn In a wave of palest cream Her smile reflects the summers warmth With cheeks that blush for me She raises her hand in delicate grace Her lily soft fingers beckoning I ardently fall into her embrace Her lilac scented love surrounds me Her rasberry lips hold the secrets of bliss Her breath flutters soft on my face In a moment of glory she blessed me with kiss That will haunt me the rest of my days On that afternoon we blossomed like spring Laying in the grass as impassioned lovers Knowing with sorrow what the new day would bring Bound in secret is our love for each other But in one afternoon my soul escaped And found solace with her under the sun She helped me discover my small twist of fate When two women's souls become one. [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was written very beautifully Poutprincess. Even in "twist of fate", you clearly share something special with this person. Nicely penned.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Exceptional writing! Honest and open minded beautifully penned with waves of deep emotion flowing throughout. Oh love is love and ever so beautiful it remains......ethome.. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Kit and ethome: thank you very much for your kind words and for allowing me to share my intimate emotions with you. You are greatly appreciated. |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
OOhhhh, how i like this, the way you express yourself and the feelings you emote about this person are well done...... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW Pout a beautifully written piece. And a poem that remains me of a dear friend of mine and the love she also found. Let you love continue to flower. THanks for sharing. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful, bittersweet poem...thank you for sharing this... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Michael G, Brian, and Serenity: its always a pleasure to share my thoughts with heartfelt poets such as yourselves......everyday each and everyone of you give me motivation to write, even when i think my imagination is failing me! thanks to you all! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and you moved me with this one miss pout... beautiful. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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