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Leaving Love
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Leaving Love |
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ashley cain Junior Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 30Texas |
Breathe on me, let your heavenly Breath swim over me like a gentle breeze on a Late summer day I am a captive in your arms as we run sprint away I wish I could live like this Forever stay in the comfort of you my shelter Sooner or later nature will call and I shall leave you never to see your angelic face again Please, let your eyes stare down into mine pools of majestic wonder OH, MY LOVE CAN YOU HERE THE THUNDER? It is time to leave, our future together will never be As I walk off you will see, my heart breaking aching For you But I know, you still love me too |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I could feel the cadence of the poem as your emotions peaked and then became nostalgic. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~wow~! i truly felt every feeling in this poem. splendidly written. i also am going thru something similar. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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