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He Kissed These Lips
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He Kissed These Lips |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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He Kissed These Lips He smiled at me with heaven's eyes And kissed the rhythm of my heart. The passions rose to music's beat Delicious thoughts, his gaze, did start. Unfolding trails of whispers deep, Surrounded by the darkness of A thousand voices guiding me Beneath the moon, it's glow above. The shouting of the silence heard Long after night had closed it's eyes, A velvet touch caressed my lips A gift to treasure came disguised. Floating down from time and space A mirrored you, not long to need. Reflecting love, a rose appeared And from behind, my eyes did feed Upon a dream, of heart in mind, A silhouette in solitaire. Shades of "lifetime" embracing me. My hand, I place into your care. A prisoner, I have become, Your kisses, I am weakened to. Surrendering, my lips are yours, Addicted I, to kiss of you. MMoonchild Maureen Scully 7*29*2k |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
He smiled at me with heaven's eyes And kissed the rhythm of my heart. this piece captured me from the get-go, MMoonchild ... a lovely piece for anyone's book ... click ... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This has got a wonderful romantic flow to it Maureen...the beautiful music of love....very much enjoyed every verse... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
from one MM to another..thank you very much..when I began to write this.....all I could think about were the eyes...and that kiss... I once wrote this for a challenge on kisses... Kisses In Your Mind It's early morn, the phone it rings Awakens me, gives start Was dreaming, I, a pleasant one No shadows in the dark. Had arms around me, warm and strong With breath an inch away When exhaled, tickled me a bit Preferred awhile to stay. It rang again, I let it go Too early still, was time Instead I rested, filled with thoughts Had kisses in my mind. Remembered when you planted them Not kisses, but the thoughts How often times you teased me so Eyes roaming body, soft. Until you saw me, on the edge Then lips to skin, would find You planted all the kiss of want As kiss thoughts in my mind. Whenever you're away from me And dreams take me on high The thoughts of lips on lips, of mine Replays in my mind's eye. Hoping that the same is true When times are tough or sad That kisses float from me to you When I am feeling "bad". (naughty) So when your eyes upon this read No matter who, you'll find Someone out there loving you Sends kisses in your mind. 2*2K |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Thank you E...once again ~~soft hugs... yes I love those mind and eye kisses very much Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, My, my, chills run up and down my spine reading these words. Very, very precious. Again, I am so glad I came by to read words that you have written. A prisoner, I have become, Your kisses, I am weakened to. Surrendering, my lips are yours, Addicted I, to kiss of you Bill..... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
E...darn you are everywhere..I keep thinking I have responded to you..well I have but in so many places I skipped this one..thank you, you are a sweetheart ~~softly Maureen hey and since I don't really know anyone on here if you would like to do a duet sometime..just give me a buzz...but for some reason my hotmail doesn't think I am me lately so you may want to try plzdntgo@aol.com. that is if you are game...p.s. I don't bite...*w..at least... not very hard Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill, thank you..I was sending this message and hit something on my keyboard that lost it..so now it won't be off the top of my head like the other..I was saying that sometimes I send chills up and down my own spine when I read what I have written..I have no idea where this comes from lately..I do believe I have at least more than one personality living within me...and she is really rising right now... ~~softly laffin' MM |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"A prisoner, I have become, Your kisses, I am weakened to. Surrendering, my lips are yours, Addicted I, to kiss of you." Wonderful rendering Maureen! Such a lovely flow ... and beautiful wording. Nicely penned indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you very, very much Kit...I am overwhelmed sometimes by the reponses on here ~~softly Maureen |
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