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DYME
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 104
Texas

0 posted 2000-07-29 11:58 PM


Blissful Love
Walk into my room with passion in your eyes
Hold me close, put your lips to mine with a lingering kiss
Lay my body softly upon my bed of roses
Slowly undress me as I slowly undress you
Kiss me, touch me gently in every place on my body
As I hold your perspiring body tightly in my arms
Put yourself into me giving me your all
Finally stopping in the latest hour of the night
Hold my body tightly against yours as we cool off
Kiss me long and hard when we awake
Then hold me untill the day never ends

If anybody has any tips on how I can make my writing become more alive, feel free to e-mail me at dyme00@hotmail.com.

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-30 03:08 AM


just the perfect amount of desperate longing...nice touch...
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-07-30 06:40 AM


WoW....baring all  


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
3 posted 2000-07-30 10:26 AM


enjoyed it..and emailed you with a few suggestions..hope it helps
~~spftly
Maureen

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