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Blissful Love |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
Blissful Love Walk into my room with passion in your eyes Hold me close, put your lips to mine with a lingering kiss Lay my body softly upon my bed of roses Slowly undress me as I slowly undress you Kiss me, touch me gently in every place on my body As I hold your perspiring body tightly in my arms Put yourself into me giving me your all Finally stopping in the latest hour of the night Hold my body tightly against yours as we cool off Kiss me long and hard when we awake Then hold me untill the day never ends If anybody has any tips on how I can make my writing become more alive, feel free to e-mail me at [email protected]. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just the perfect amount of desperate longing...nice touch... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WoW....baring all  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
enjoyed it..and emailed you with a few suggestions..hope it helps ~~spftly Maureen |
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