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Hotel Paradise
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Hotel Paradise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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She's sitting downtown in a bus staion crying, She's got a one-way ticket home.. A cold rain is falling, while her heart keeps on calling to the man she called her own.. She didn't know when they started that he'd leave her broken-hearted, gave him every bit of lovin' that she had.. Now the hurt just keeps growing, and the tears just keep flowing for the love that turned out bad... Inside, something told her that his love had gotten colder, she could see it dying slowly in his eyes.. He had found himself another and tonight he was Her lover at the Hotel Paradise.. Sitting all alone and drinking, couldn't keep her mind from thinking, and she knew what must be done.. She grabbed her coat..combed her hair.. locked the door..started the car..then put the bullets in her gun... They had left the local bar..the Hotel wasn't far.. neon signs were blinking bright.. When he laid her on the bed..Not a word was said, as he turned to dim the light.. He saw his wife there at the door and knew she couldn't take no more, because her smile was cold as ice.. No one ever found the gun, and she walked, she didn't run.. from the Hotel Paradise... ..Hotel Paradise.. ..Love is easy.. ..Hotel Paradise.. ..No one tells.. ..Hotel Paradise.. ..Lover's Heaven.. ..But if they catch you.. ..It's a lot like Hell! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny...Another brilliant work, I liked this very much. My congradulations to you my good friend, and keep that pen moving. And always smile, like the photo that I have seen. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill.... Thank you!! I thank you again, and I can't seem to stop writing..at least not until my pen runs out of ink!!!! Glad you liked it.... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny this is fantastic, it reminded me of a complete story, I loved it.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha...Thank you, and it is a complete story, and probably true in some sad cases. Glad you liked it! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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