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Scattered Kisses |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Today's Forecast Prevailing wishes of moist wet kisses A warm front moving towards you A downpour of signals becoming misses Rain never ending in this night and through Tomorrows Forecast Blowing soft breaths into your ear Returning sun rays coming my way Later scattered kisses change what wasn't clear Your love storm approaches towards the end of the day Next Weeks Forecast It's going to be a hot one Temperature is going up another thirty degrees Two warm body fronts merge hotter than the sun Humidity rises to levels setting them free |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
Loved the 'forcasting"...what an interesting concept. great work insect! Tony the ones who don't do anything are always the ones who try to put you down - Henry Rollins |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
I'm sitting here with a big grin on my face. I loved this poem. Good stuff. Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Insect.. I have to say I am also grinning at this poem. It even made me chuckle. lol Very clever  rosepetals25 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like romance is forcast for days to come...what a sizzling way to portray it...James |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
T McCoy…Was fun to write thank you!  beowulf_26…Thanks I hope I can bring more smiles! rosepetals25…Thanks I love to make people laugh or smile! jmlee12345…Thanks James Maybe I can give another forecast later! [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well insect...not much to say but the temp is rising in the scheme of enjoyment...this was very creative and I love it ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Laughing.... Wonderful write ~~ a biorhythmic barometer! Nice creative flare. EWDrake |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey insect that is really clever I enjoyed the concept.......I hope you are a better forecaster than the ones on TV...I'm sure you are...Good work! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here ... terrific poem! A beautiful forecast indeed, and here I thought it was going to rain my whole vacation! Thanks for the grins and sighs Insect! Best wishes, /Kit |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Mmoonchild…Thank you Yes the weather can get very hot! Ha! LOL EWDrake…Thank you Glad you had a laugh! ethome…Thank you If I could forecast this for everyone there wouldn't be much time for poetry! Just physical poetry!! Kit McCallum…Love to forecast smiles your way! Left you a little something in… Adrift in this Love Thank you for your reply! [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The title grabbed me and I'm glad it did. I like the looks of your summer's weather and can you tell me....is it headed this way? Fun and enjoyable read. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I love your weather...can I play in your storm? never say never |
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N2Wishin Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 38 |
Too Hot!!! Any chance of rain? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me and dog both grinning at this one! Well done... jwesley |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Mark Bohannan…Thank you Happy you had fun! I did also on writing this one. Paula Finn…On the air or off air? Thanks there may be a storm coming your way!! N2Wishin…Thank you for your reply jwesley…Give the dog a bone for staring you out! I had to read yours a few times thanks!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I like this forcast, nice concept. Its a weather brain of an idea... Parker |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! What a forecast. This brings about one great image, nice work. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Thank you It's the brainy season! LOL oh2beme…Thank you I forecast sunny days for you! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
No need to go outside With a downpour such as this Just stay in bed and enjoy the tide The tide that comes with the storm of total bliss In conclusion to this forcast We'll have to find a way of cooling off And if the heat wave proves to last Cooling off will be kind of tough Loved it!  kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
kat… Today's Forecast Rivers will overflow Gushing with pleasure Fast undercurrents go Changing with weather Tomorrows Forecast Flood dams released Soaking dry river beds Animals begin to feast And wet their bodies and their heads Next Weeks Forecast They run naked and free through the rain Multiple floods now everyday More gushers of pleasure pain Animal storms coming in every way Thanks kat |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
WOW! I guess you're predicting alot of downpours for quite some time I see. LOL  kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
The kat came back the very next month!! He! He! Got to keep things wet! |
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