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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-07-29 09:09 AM


Lovingly Haunting
Inspired by E. Santos

It is a picture I have
of you in my mind
lovingly haunting
it will find

me thinking of you
at desk or such
penning words
that only you touch.

A picture of you
romance at its best
pouring forth your heart
giving no less.

Lovingly haunting
your words will be
and we look forward
to your poetry.

I see you here,
in my mind's eye
and enjoined to that
a picture of Sy

who reads your words
and captures your feel
in paint on canvas
so it becomes real

I see your mind
in glory bent
in Sudhir's poems
of vacations spent,

in Sven's remarks
of his Knighthood dreams
in Balladeer's quest
to sketch his dreams,

In Claire's portraits
in Christopher's philosophies,
Marge's spirit
and in Janet Marie,

each stroke of your pen
touches Helmut and Mark
and Prometheus comes
to see your new spark

of light as it shines
for each Parker and Kit
and Justbleu is here
and takes part in it

for you are lovingly haunting
as only you can be
and Ms. Santos, Elizabeth,
I curtsey to the art of thee.


©Karilea Rilling Jungel
29 July 2000



Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
beowulf_26
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1 posted 2000-07-29 11:32 AM


very nice.  I guess the people of the forums do "lovingly haunt" from their computers.  Nice title.
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2000-07-29 12:18 PM


Sunshine,
What a very lovely way to show homeage to the people of Passions that you know. Well done Sunshine.

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 2000-07-29 01:04 PM


This is so beautiful, Sunshine, and I must completely agree ~ her writing haunts the heart.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-07-29 02:11 PM


beowulf, Bill, Claire, thank you! Elizabeth Santos is a muse, a mentor, and a gifted artist...someone I greatly admire!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-07-29 07:28 PM



Hauntingly Lovely

I thank you for the beautiful words
Sung by dear Sunshine like warbling birds
You are very kind to credit my muse
But my heart thinks the poetess slightly confused

I reversed the title and reverse the true
For my inspiration comes straight from you
It is all of the poets exposing their art
That bring inspiration and love to my heart

We learn from each other, react to the songs
Of passion and frienship, of right and of wrong
If my verse has touch someone, then I am content
As your verses have touched me as though heaven sent

Thank you, dear Sunshine, kind words you impart
With this tribute you are now exposing your heart

Thank you so much and thank you ,dear poets, for your lovely remarks

Liz

Denise
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6 posted 2000-07-29 08:55 PM


This is a wonderful tribute to a great poet and person!  

Denise

Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-07-29 11:14 PM


We could get in a clapping contest Elizabeth, so I will bow to you...

denise, thanks! Elizabeth is one talented person!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Janet Marie
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8 posted 2000-07-30 09:36 AM


Sun,
thank you for sending me this way...i have been working overtime and with the site down so much as well, i have missed many poems...
thank you so much for including me in your loving tribute to our poetic queen...
i love the feel of this poem ...
Liz inspires us all...she is a gift of poetry.
take care,
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Jamie
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9 posted 2000-07-30 10:20 AM


I feel less worthy of posting my poems here with each passing day; but by reading poems like this and those of many of the others here maybe I will one day rise to the occaison.
   Very nice Sunshine



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2000-07-30 10:33 AM


Oh Sunshine ... what a beautifully flowing tribute to Liz!  I echo your sentiments, for she is indeed a talented poet I so enjoy reading.  You have penned this so wonderfully Karilea, simply superb, and I so enjoy reading your artful works as well!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Martie
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11 posted 2000-07-30 10:45 AM


Sunshine--thank you for posting this lovely poem inspired by Liz...she has inspired me so many times with her poetry and her beautiful spirit.
Sunshine
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12 posted 2000-07-30 10:47 AM


JanetMarie I too know what OT is...lots of it lately...so glad you took a moment for R&R...

Prometheus...that feeling will pass, trust me...you are far too worthy a poet and I enjoy everything you pen...

Kit...your talents are inspiring but as Elizabeth says, we all learn from one another...as I have learned from you...

thank you all...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Sunshine
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13 posted 2000-07-30 10:50 AM


Martie, you snuck in on me...that's what I get for blinking...

you are quite welcome.  Elizabeth Santos will remain one of my favorites in the spirit of Browning and others...don't you think?

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2000-07-30 11:48 AM


What an inspiring personality and what an inspirational offering....

I bow to both of you....

My regards Karilea,
Sudhir

jwesley
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15 posted 2000-07-30 11:51 AM


Much, much applause from these humble hands.

jwesley

Sunshine
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16 posted 2000-07-31 09:24 AM


Sudhir, jwesley...Elizabeth has many gifts, and we are grateful that she shares so well...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Mark Bohannan
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17 posted 2000-07-31 11:22 AM


Wow-Am I glad I caught this one.  Tis a wonderful tribute to Liz and I share your
feeling in that she is so awesome and always
so inspirational in her writes.  Yours fall
right in there as well and I applaud your write and even more so your Heart!

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