Open Poetry #8 |
Denial |
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Where-within empty walls- does such a love reside? Shall I misplace a shadow box of Fate- Only to see my Destiny shrivel past recognition? What of Lust- impowerment in itself, inside? Shall I compare my own trust, belated- Base my fears and desire on purest intuition? Gratification shall not triumph, in my world alone- As scorn lies heavily upon my tongue, While you and I breathe in perfect measure. Beneath this world, I stand altar to the stone- As life’s song has eternally been sung, To need- to want, these have become my treasures. Tears mark my only truth, suffice it to be loneliness… Upon this dream, I falter to pray, oh blessed strength- To end is only to begin yet in your arms, as it is worth… Yearning brought on, by tender-sweet caress… To melt unto you would be concrete- Ginger designs mark a true path that is worn…. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hope that your shoes are in good condition Devina. . . looks like you're going down that path again. . . but maybe this time, you'll find what you're looking for. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Beneath this world, I stand altar to the stone..." Oh man...where have ya been my sista? This is great, and you are developing quite an edge there---comes in handy for sacrifices...LOL...love ya much...write some time, will ya? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Devina~ Fantastic writings girl thanks for the wonderful read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
could I remind you that I'm still reading your works..? I do pray everything is well with you. It could be that I just get to caught up in your words. love & prayers. lucky (dale) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Just a little turbulance going on??? LOL Good Luck. You know where I am. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You've written some powerful stuff here devina! Take heart and have faith in yourself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina, my little friend~ This is powerful penning. You excel. 'To melt unto you would be concrete- Ginger designs mark a true path that is worn….' Know that I love ya' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Very deep and powerful words here, to which I hope things go well...... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven- yes m'friend...these shoes have been made for walking...so I guess that's what I'll do!! and believe me when I say...you'll be the first to know!! serenity- now you know that you and I were made for sacrifices- tis why we get along so well!! G* I've missed you sis!! tracie66- thanks to you as always!! lucky- I know you're there...even if I don't hear from you...I always know my dear friend...all is well- as far as I know? he he Marina- Turbulence wouldn't even begin to describe this feeling I've found...so zip those lips!! ROFL Sharon- now those are some words to think on...thanks girl!! Marge- Know that I love ya just as much dear...and thank you, my karma-inspiration!!! Michael- so you're keeping your fingers crossed with me, I hope?? TY Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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