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Two Souls, One Goal
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Two Souls, One Goal |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
So many choices for us to make. It's hard to decide which road to take. The road in which we want to go Is where the peaceful waters flow. But, be it as life is today, Not everything will go our way. Together we'll stay and weather the ride. From destiny, we can not hide. We are two souls, but with one goal. To blend our lives and make them whole. Strangers together we'll never be. And I'll always be there when you need me. |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
Beautiful. I totally envy the person it was written for. Up you go for others to see. Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Eloise~ This is so beautiful and a precious little piece you have written ...well done  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just as it should be, Eloise! Very good! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ I like the softness of this. 'I'll always be there when you need me' Reason enough ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
beowulf, thank you so much for your kind comments. Actually, I think I'm the lucky one. Tracie, thanks to you too. Denise, your thoughts are always appreciated.  Marge, absolutely. Thanks. |
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