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Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
Many summers I have seen Just as many winters there have been So many Springs went by Like leafs the Autumns fell But I remember still the first time we met I saw in your eyes lifes love As from a mirror reflecting Your simple beauty In my heart I happily hold In your eyes I've seen the sunrise The silver golden rays of dawn Even in your eyes I've seen midnight's silver dew sparkling oh so tenderly, In your hair there be wild flowers with hues of blue and rose In your laughter, I've seen green gardens, like no one's ever known Your heart it holds the secrets of summer's first found breath Your mind it shares the brilliance of a diamond's brilliance Your soul, it shines bright white then glitters effervescent pink I 've known heaven in a heartbeat, when thoughts of you I think Your voice carries the magic of a rainbow's sweet surprise gently caressing the horizon To bring love and mystify Our love, like starlight from the heavens from ages past Eluding time, whirling through space Past the moon,beyond the galaxies so far away Yet right here I remember still Emitted through our hearts. Captured this moment By the twinkle in your eye Our love, More brilliant than any supernova explosian Burning in the Universe Burning bright Forever I should have mentioned this before but I forgot this Poem is Seeking Seeing rewrittenand renamed [This message has been edited by Zion (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Your heart it holds the secrets of summer's first found breath Your mind it shares the brilliance of a diamond's brilliance Your soul, it shines bright white then glitters effervescent pink I've known heaven in a heartbeat, when thoughts of you I think Your voice carries the magic of a rainbow's sweet surprise gently caressing the horizon To bring love and mystify these images are lovely, Zion ~~softly Maureen |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Can I say hot, on fire, awesome, just burning my heart? Great job!!!!  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
MMoonchild /Xeonox thank you for your words of encourage ment I didn't mean to decieve I simply forget to mention it was rewritten and renamed I was in a rush at the time forgive me please |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hot, Passionate, and superb imagery. I do believe you have a keeper here. Great work. Keep it up. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
oh nowwwww I understand what that email was about..gee I liked the poem no matter what the title..what more needs be said, Zion oh yes one thing needs be asked..are you having trouble posting anything new..I can't seem to except for replies...and I have rebooted etc..and emptied out temps, too. ~~softly sighing Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zion~ This is a lovely piece. 'Many summers I have seen Just as many winters there have been So many Springs went by Like leafs the Autumns fell' Easy reading here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Zion...so very lovely the images just flow across my mind...wonderful never say never |
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