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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Upon my pillow fast asleep, Drifting in and out of dreams. Disconnected thoughts go through So many different scenes. A childhood memory I can see As I walk into the room. I feel the warmth of its grasp, But it vanished all too soon. Floating in the shadows I see you standing there. But when I reach to hold you, You fade into the air. Then visions of my loved ones Who are gathered all around, To share in love and laughter Is a satisfying sound. And off into the distance A stranger I do see. Is it someone I will meet? Will he be a friend to me? No rhyme or reason for these scenes. Throughout the night they just come and go. Is there a meaning to all of this? I sure would like to know. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ A fascinating look at your dreams. There is an answer to be found - may you recognize it when it comes. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You hit the nail on the head with this!! Great work...and yes it sure would be nice to know what it all meant! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Eloise.... They say that your sleep level is at it's best when you are dreaming.... I love the way you wrote this! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Upon my pillow fast asleep, Drifting in and out of dreams. Disconnected thoughts go through So many different scenes. No rhyme or reason for these scenes. Throughout the night they just come and go. Is there a meaning to all of this? I sure would like to know. One of the mysterys of life. Great creation with this one. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, I hope so, thanks.  BDC, thanks. Sunny, I'm glad you like it. Thanks. Thank you Mark. They really are a mystery at times. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
A childhood memory I can see As I walk into the room. I feel the warmth of its grasp, But it vanished all too soon. Floating in the shadows I see you standing there. But when I reach to hold you, You fade into the air. _______________________________ I loved these lines. Aren't we always grasping at memories? I know I am. If you find the answer, let me know.... "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you AniKay. You're absolutely right. I know I'm always looking back and reminiscing. |
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