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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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-gameless love- freestyle If I was able to give you the world -- Not a globe, not a map, but the world -- Would you take it? Or would you ask for more? If I were to kiss you on your lips, your throat Your breasts, Would you give in? Or push me out the door? If I were to jump in front of your window While you were reading a book, Would you take a look? Call me a crook? If I climbed the highest tree I could find, Picked the sun from the sky, Lay it burning on the ground, Would you tell me to come back down? If I told you love was four clouds in the sky, Surrounding the sun that I picked and was gone, Would you cry? Or just lie? |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike* The title alone has me liking this one...Is there really such a thing...I'm beginning to wonder...great work~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
B_d_c, glad you enjoyed; and I wonder the same thing. Mike |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ this is very cool  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
first--release idea of dice twice because it's twice as nice... Thrice for three which is the charm Four, for keepers of the dawn... Five breathes you alive and then... Six baptises you in Styx... Seven would be, if it could, and Eight, eternal, cancels "should"-- Nine is but a man complete, to start with Zero at his feet... one for you luvie...hope ya didn't mind... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA, Thanks. serenity, Don't mind at all. I loved your poem. The wording was just -- wow. Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey Mike--spin again... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
unique style, bsquirrel ... edgy form and flow ... i like ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
If I told you love was four clouds in the sky, Surrounding the sun that I picked and was gone, Would you cry? Or just lie? I love your wording in this poem....your unusual thoughts are beguiling. |
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