Open Poetry #8 |
She Knows |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
She knows me And how she makes me feel She wants once more To be free with me And I'm not sure I'm able Or willing to let her go From my arms like this The way that we held One another in moonlight's kiss. She knows me And the world that she offes Comes closer to mt life Then falls away from each other No, I will not forget her Nor will I let her slip away For the things we share Is more than all to offer. She knows me And the love that I am feeling But the question remains Could I let her go? Or would I remember what What I am turning away And hold her in my arms Not wanting to say the words The ones I meant to say To say I love her And I don't want you To ever go away. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Sure she knows my friend. Great poem. Nice usuage of emotions.!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Maybe she does know, but it's always nice to be told, especially like this, again and again...nice! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i do so love the way your write ... Im still here...be in touch soon, promise keep writing it all out... take care Michael jm |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww...this is sweet |
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