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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2000-07-27 01:27 PM


She knows me
And how she makes me feel
She wants once more
To be free with me
And I'm not sure I'm able
Or willing to let her go
From my arms like this
The way that we held
One another in moonlight's kiss.

She knows me
And the world that she offes
Comes closer to mt life
Then falls away from each other
No, I will not forget her
Nor will I let her slip away
For the things we share
Is more than all to offer.

She knows me
And the love that I am feeling
But the question remains
Could I let her go?
Or would I remember what
What I am turning away
And hold her in my arms
Not wanting to say the words
The ones I meant to say
To say I love her
And I don't want you
To ever go away.

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1 posted 2000-07-27 01:39 PM


Sure she knows my friend. Great poem. Nice usuage of emotions.!!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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2 posted 2000-07-27 03:39 PM


Maybe she does know, but it's always nice to be told, especially like this, again and again...nice!
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2000-07-27 09:12 PM


i do so love the way your write ...
Im still here...be in touch soon, promise  
keep writing it all out...
take care Michael
jm

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4 posted 2005-04-22 07:57 PM


awww...this is sweet
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