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Lovers dreams |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I awoke from the thoughts of the Soft flesh chorus Running through my head With the verses in my bed I saw in the night words My love in her nightskirt Beauty I had yet unheard Under the stars of the night Images are love filled bodies not gone unfulfilled In the hearts race won the docile animal had come Heart pounding in my chest Her face a picture harmless In the heat of passions light a vision in satin vanishs in my mind My waking goes unnoticed Her slumber continues seemless I kiss the cheek and caress And long for a piece of the sun Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Touching, love the last stanza. Corinne |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very touching and sweet poem my friend. Awesome piece. Keep it up. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I saw in the night words My love in her nightskirt Beauty I had yet unheard Under the stars of the night Images are love filled bodies not gone unfulfilled In the hearts race won the docile animal had come Heart pounding in my chest Her face a picture harmless In the heat of passions light a vision in satin vanishs in my mind My waking goes unnoticed Her slumber continues seemless I kiss the cheek and caress And long for a piece of the sun ========================= seems to me after reading this very special poem that you already have a piece of the sun... your heart glows in this beauty... you've got some really cool lines in this as well... Running through my head With the verses in my bed ==================== I saw in the night words My love in her nightskirt ======================= Images are love filled bodies not gone unfulfilled ======================== Her face a picture harmless ========================= Her slumber continues seemless ========================== And long for a piece of the sun =========================== very cool indeed  jm |
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