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Open Poetry #8

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skarmageddon
New Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 6
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 2000-07-27 08:51 AM

red, white, and blue,
or is it read and yellow?
I can't really remember,
the views change so often,
I used to love this place,
this place i cannot stand,
the truth is inevitable,
but it's a,
don't ask, don't tell policy.
you actually have to think for yourself,
scary phrase isn't it?
thinking for yourself requires,
so much effort.
that you aren't willing to exert,
for one simple moment.
but ask me and will tell.
for i am the person your parents warned you of
but they'll never know will they?
i won't make you smoke, drink, or do drugs.
but i will change your morals,
your views, your dreams
beware
i am the truth

MysticalAngel
Junior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 23

1 posted 2000-07-27 08:59 PM

Wow!Once again Jon you out did me in your poetry writing! You are really talented at writing and expressing your feelings through words. I am impressed. Very good! Talk to you later. Carissa

** If something is too good to be true... 9 times out of 10 it is **

deb
Junior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 44
Reading, Pa., USA

2 posted 2000-07-27 09:34 PM

Excellent message!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I feel the same.

deb

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