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As yet untitled - at least for now :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I'll come back later and explain how I came up with this piece. I think it is a "wierd" story. LOL Where do we go from here? Tears of an empty heart Alone and scared Lonely in love The price I paid to fall A hand full of memories A pocket full of dreams Emotions aplenty Lowly stranger And the heartache begins Time after time Tomorrow seeking guidance Of a love reborn Smoke in the forest Another vision drawn Today I found forever In the arms of you Too late to say I’m sorry For things I didn’t do |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffery, However you came up with this, it seems to be a fantastic collection of song titles or atleast catch phrases for many many songs... I enjoyed reading...  regards, sudhir |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Whatever you did it seems to fit...so tell Jeffrey never say never |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well, actually Sudhir is very close. See, I have this folder on my desktop that I put title ideas in. And believe it or not I didn't even have to re-arrange them. This is the very order they are in in the folder, which is why I said "wierd" LOL In any case , Thank you two for reading and replying |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Jeffrey, now that's "my" kind of weird. Don't you love it when these things happen? This really works! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, That is wierd!!! I like this one. maybe we should expand on some of those titles? Hmm, let me know. Nice writing my friend. Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
This is fascinateing i can see each title seperately yet they have come together beautifully in this piece i wonder about naming this perhaps 'Entitled to love' a little to corny but you know it never hurts to be obvious Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jeffrey.... Great posting here!! Very unique and it worked together real well. ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
That's an amazing piece of arranging you did there. Sometimes wonderful things just fall out of the sky like that don't they? I love it when that happens Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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