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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Two lost and wondering souls, Stumbling through space and time Discovering an eternal bond.. a connection They have been searching for their whole lives. Your soft breath on the curve of my neck, The gentle caress of your strong hands, The exquisite feel of your warm body Driving and grinding into to mine. As our souls mingle, becoming one In a rush of unimaginable pleasure. A connection… body, mind, and soul So much more than a feeling or an emotion. A love stronger than we could ever imagine Controlling us… guiding our souls through life Supplying us with an unbreakable strength And a happiness that only a rare few have known. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That is absolutely delightful.....there's a lot of truth in there.....I love the title and how it ties in with the body of the poem I've always believed in those connections...I don't think they can be denied.....I think this deserves a vote... take care......ethome.. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ethome - Thank you. I also strongly believe in connections and how special and life changing they can be.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25, Whew, nice and nicer. Very close and touching, well done. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Mmmm... intense. So few find that connection, but man when they do! Wonderful poem! |
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