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The Cut That Cures
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The Cut That Cures |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Excise that mass of faultless grief which binds the senses still in place Extract what will affirm belief that you may gaze into the face of what would rule your ev'ry thought and cause far more than deep despair The coin with which it has been bought exceeds by far a value fair Lest indecision rule the hand examine close in reason's light what hasteful glance may serve to brand as yours through guilt how-ever slight A wound thus formed will let us feel and salved with time begin to heal |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're really coming clean with this one... great read. "A wound thus formed will let us feel and salved with time begin to heal." Very good doc. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very wise words, Dr. Moose! Great poem too! Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
hay doc I ever tell ya, ya writ good? well ya do!  I likes muchly! ~H |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
ethome, Thank you ! One of my more "pensive" works, But then again , what Doctor do you know that works cheap ? d, You never cease to amaze , where do you find the time for all these replys? X Angel, thanx , I dun studyed reel harde sos I cood tri ta .Yur mutch two kynd ! Doc |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dr. M, Wise and forgiving words, most poetically stated. Superb writing, to my way of thinking. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ I like the moose droppings here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1, Agree with Meadowmuse, You did a good job on this one. Enjoyed. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Claire, I am honored ( that to your way of thinking ) you found this to be of merit , as I have found so many of your "musings" to be . Marge, All I can say is , put your boots on for the next one ! Sy, To imitate , or emulate , this is my question. With practice , I may yet come to penning works that may rival yours . Your comments are always appreciated . Doc |
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