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JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

0 posted 2000-07-26 10:59 AM

                             Iron

                       Rain never ending.
                         Blue memories,
                           Gray sky.

                       Pain is not forever.
                          For tomorrow,
                           I may die.

                            Or not.
                          Only fading,
                         Ashes to dust.

                            Darkness
                          Overtaking,
                         Iron to rust.

                         Strengths ebb.
                         Visions fail.
                           Who am I ?
                      To assail, the Night

                          John D LeClare

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

1 posted 2000-07-26 11:31 AM

First Welcome John D
this made me want to reply in haiku...

Morn is rising gray
Reigning dampness all around
Cleansing today's pain.

Tomorrow shall clear
The mind will open to light
Myst will fog no more.

The yesterday's gone
Today's shall strengthen and cling
Removing all doubt.

~~soft smiles
Maureen

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-07-26 12:01 PM

Welcome to Passions!! Great entrance~
packing alot of feeling into so few
lines......something I don't have a knack
for so I'm always in awe of those that can!
I'll look forward to more of your work
in the future!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2000-07-26 12:06 PM

Welcome to Passions I know you will enjoy your stay. Great poem to start with, well done!

take care.........ethome..

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-07-26 12:28 PM

Hi John...
           Ahh....I see that you have been
    welcomed, so I will 'ditto' all of the
    above.
           I liked this read....few words,
    but powerful!!
           Hope to see more.......< !signature-->

Love received is equal to love given!

[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-26-2000).]

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-07-26 04:16 PM

Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting!

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