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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lips with no meaning More than anything I wanted to be your one and only lover. So many times I tried to keep us together. Yet time after time I could clearly see your heart chose not to fall in love with me. Yes, you possessed me in all your earthy splendor and each time I gazed at your lips they looked warm and they looked tender. No doubt, my lips wanted to feel loves every pleasure but her lips were thinking, enough already, why are we still together? Your kiss was lonely because you held back your love. They were lips with no meaning. Just a pair of empty lips hanging there. Somehow it just doesn't work when no love is attached. When only one cares and the other has no feelings to share. Have you ever thought about two lips going together with one wanting to give love and pleasure and the other thinking whatever. Your cold and crazy one way heart is destined to keep our lips apart. A heart unwilling to share a tender touch nor share a kiss, some love and trust. So tell me please are you real? Whats the deal with those empty lips? Don't you have a heart to give? I chose to give my love to you. Answers please. Why did you choose not to? Jameslee@March3,2000 July26,2000 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah James, Such honest questions... I can feel with you when I read this.... I hope that you are over that phase now... Take Care, Sudhir |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, I remember this one. I always liked the meaning you present here. You know you have my vote! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sudhir and Marina thank you so much...my sincere appreciation. This was from a relationship a ways into my past right now...as I thought of the relationship in retrospect I was hurt and I was angry...even today I still try to learn lessons from this...to find relationships that are mutual...a hard task for me because I seem to love to chase women that are unavailable...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James I know all too well this feeling and you have penned it beautifully. Great write my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SBJ..i was trying to recall just yesterday if you had submitted for the book... Im pleased to see this today. a perfect reflection of your tender heart. jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee12345, I love your poems of romance, lost loves, and one way feelings. Keep writing my friend, and I definitely will keep coming back. Wishes for you in finding that love that you are looking for. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Mark, Janet, and Bill for your comments. Bill I wish I could write a poem called True Romance...about a never ending love affair...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, how well you put it! Love has no meaning if it doesn't come from within!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ahhhhhh James...I know how you feel about "love poems"...they elude me 99% of the time, you penned this one with your heart and it's an honor to vote for a poem that evokes so much feeling~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marsha for the nice response. I was talking to a friend last night while we were kissing and I was telling her about this poem "Lips with no meaning" and she said what do I mean by that expression and I explained to her if both don't have the same feelings the kiss is meaningless. I did feel the sincerity of her kiss...I am not sure about mine...yet... Thank you Butterflies...yes I sincerly Love a good "love poem". One in which you can feel the emotions as you read the words....James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Try one more time...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
To the top for James... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm starting to believe I'm the only one that likes this...James |
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