The Cry (what one who you love hands you when you seperate)

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Open Poetry #8

The Cry (what one who you love hands you when you seperate)

niceguy6459
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since 2000-07-24

Posts 4

0 posted 2000-07-26 02:42 AM

The Cry
The cry was quiet
The cry was nor heard
It didn't cause a riot
It was the silent cry

The silent cry is the worst cry of all
It is the one that hurts so much-
So much that you cannot move
The silent cry stalkes you in the night
You will not know it if you see it
When it grabs hold of your life-
Your life will never be the same

The cry is brought on by pain
Pain that only one person can cause
That person has the silent cry
It's like a desease
Passed from ont to the other
It is not contaiges
Unless you want it to be

The silent cry sees you
It knows who you are
It will travel a distance
It will divower you
From the inside
It will soon be here
From its distance of a far

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-07-26 03:04 AM

This is so very sad...that silent cry just ripping through your heart

never say never

linda munday
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

2 posted 2000-07-26 03:12 AM

Welcome Niceguy to passionate forums.
This is so sad, who could have hurt you like that?
It was very heartfelt and had me feeling your pain.
Thank you, please write more poems for us to see.
Linda M.

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
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3 posted 2000-07-26 01:39 PM

I agree with the silant cry, very deep piece. I think this is my first read of any of your pieces. Very nice. Voted also.

Parker

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