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Make Believe Land
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Make Believe Land |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Take me to a land that's far away < !signature-->Where unicorns dance and children always play I wanna go where the sun always shines Where there is no povery and no crime Someplace warm, surrounded by white colored sands Falling stars, lucky charms, where everything is grand Candy hearts, chocolate kisses, this I want and more Want to go with the eagles, my soul to soar Where the angels roam, and carebears dance Crystal waterfalls, puffy clouds, where all animals prance It may be make believe, but take me there Where I can be me without a care Smiling faces, beautiful places, take me to the land that doesn't exist Where my love will be waiting for me Lips apart waiting for that magical kiss This is where I want to go for all eternity "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Can I come with you to this place? It sounds absolutely gorgeous and perfect to me...truly beautiful work Aimster, this one deserves another read!  *Krista Knutson* First say to yourself what you would be; and then do what you have to do. ~Epictetus~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,....got room enough for me? hehe. Oh i just love Lucky Charms...haha..my fav. although I think that you meant another kind. This is such a sweet poem...so floaty and dreamy. Thanks for sharing it. *Peace. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is a great poem. I want to go too. Sounds like a wonderful place to be! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LOL. sure everyone can go. have your bags packed by morning hehe. we are going on VACATION! i wish! thanks you guys for your sweet replies...y'all so sweet! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im all packed ... got my ticket to ride ... where did you say we were going??... the windy city  beautiful poem my dear maybe if we dream it... it will come to be love ya jm |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Aim~ A place I long to be as well, wouldn't it be fantastic to live in a perfect world..we wish I love your make believe land TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'd say I'd love to go, but I think you just took me there Amy ... if only for a minute! Thanks for the little journey ... it was magical! Best wishes, /Kit |
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