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Tonight And Every Night
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Tonight And Every Night |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Tonight And Every Night Fly with me tonight on gossamer wings of misty dreams as you lay in outstretched arms Sigh with me tonight in soft heated breaths that coincide as we move in one rhythm Cry with me tonight in warm quiet tears of happiness as I give you all my love To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely expressions HootOwl ... tantalizing and so romantic, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice poem, I had to think about this one, very cleverly written . L.of.L. Tom .   Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of the emotions flying high... well done, Ruth Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i am very happy for you hoot |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beautiful expressions here, Ruth... Regards, sudhir |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Very beautiful, I enjoyed it very much. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
PERFECT |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hoot this was great and simply written!! What a lovely poem!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Fly with me tonight on gossamer wings of misty dreams as you lay in outstretched arms beautiful and magical Ruth. excellent. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is breathtaking. each stanza flows into the next as though on the wings of an angel. beautiful work you always post that leaves me in awe...and as marge would say, this one is a "gem." take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Most lovely thoughts, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
makes me sigh, makes me cry, makes me happy for you girl....great poem |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully written... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
How could any man help but not cry with you....So see you cry would bring tears to any with a heart Ruth. It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A man would die to fly, sigh and cry with you, hoot. Wonderful thoughts portrayed here  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you all for the kind comments and your continued support of my poetry |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful , Ive missed reading your peoms , I have many to catch up on I look forward to them |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* this poem floats and flys with grace hootgirl... your muse seems to have sprouted wings lovely poem Ruth-gator later jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Syntax Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 25 |
A very romantic work, pleasingly penned with words of love. *sigh* syntax |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Simply beautiful! Made me feel like I was FULL of love! Thanks for sharing this. ~Sheri |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Perfectly concise, not a word wasted. Each stanza an image of its own. Simply beautiful! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Ruth, this is beautiful! It must be wonderful to find such love. I'm happy for you, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Ruth, I found this poem very expressive and erotic. You captured me with the very first words, well done. David2 |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Breath-takingly beautiful poem, Hoot! Nice to see you in here again, your poetry is always a treat. I am very happy for you. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ruth, Sweet poetry!!! Makes me sigh....oh what a love. This is wonderful and I am so happy for you my friend. Beautiful writing!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Ruth! May all your dreams be your reality! Denise |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Amen, sister! Boy, can I relate to this! Soaring here, madam -- perhaps we'll meet somewhere Heavenward -- I'll be sure to wave! --Kess YOUR LIFE IS A TEST It is only a test ... If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beautifully done, Ruth. Enjoyed this very much. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Once again...thank you everyone for your kind, kind words. May today find you all soaring |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, and just the way it should be, dear lady! Corinne |
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