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Open Poetry #8

Perfect Days In Life

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-07-25 08:39 PM

What is so rare
As a day in June?
If ever,
Come perfect days,
The heaven tries earth
If It be In tune,

And over It softly her
warm ear lay,
Whether we look
Or we listen to the words
said Into our ears,

We hear or see
It through once again,
Every part of life Is
Important to us,
Cause we have to live
By something are have in life,

So let the days be perfect in life,
Within that reaches us,
And blindly above It
For light whatever of life
comes flooding back with a day,

We care about ,
Now the heart is so full
That a drop overfills It,
We are happy because
god will it,

No matter ,
How the past may have been,
It's enough for us,
Now that our life is going well,
And the eyes forget
the tears they have shed,

The heart forgets
Its sorrow and ache,
The soul Is with us,

And when we know
the time Is here for us,
To hold our every breathe we take,
Whether we look onto our hearts,

To find our what might
Comes out for us In life,
Perfect Days In Life,

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-07-25 09:48 PM

Beautiful thoughts in this Vandana!

Denise

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-07-25 10:28 PM

I enjoyed this very much Vandana. I really like this poem. Well done.

Wicked Witch of the East
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 69

3 posted 2000-07-26 09:04 AM

Well written and enjoyable poem.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-07-26 09:14 AM

This is fabulous writing Vandana...

regards,
sudhir

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

5 posted 2000-07-30 09:43 PM

Nicely written poem. Excellent writing.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-07-31 07:40 PM

VanDana~
May you have many happy days in your life.
These are certainly lovely thoughts, dear.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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