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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma 
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Two Women Alone I sit to play A game sometimes no one wins I fear I love two women Tell me lord is that a sin Both of them they have me Yet in such seperate ways How did I get in this position When I look back it's all a haze One she shares my money My time, my home, my life The other, the keys to my heart and soul Why can't she be my wife They both own a part of me To neither I can contend Was not long ago I swore Not to be here again But my cards are on the table It is too late to fold Destiny holds the key To what the future holds Until then I will gamble Till the game comes to an end But still lies the question Will I make the same decision Again |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
excellent poem! this is a VERY hard decision...i'd go with some advice along the lines of follow your heart. maybe some of my friends here can help out or got some other words of advice. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a wonderful poem a hard decision to be made , follow your heart, I wish you all the luck in the world Julie |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Yeah,...I read this now three times and it's a tough call. I could go on and on but I'll spare you. hehe. This seems like it's straight from within though and I'd like to thank ya for having the courage to post it. It's a great expression and well done. Take care...I do hope things work out for you. *Peace. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow! This really sounds familiar. It is a very hard decision and yes I would agree with the rest. Follow your heart but make sure you see the whole picture before jumping in. Sometimes the grass isn't always greener on the other side but then again you don't know, it may just be. I loved your poem. Well done! Something I can really relate to in more then one way. Hope to see alot more from you Kat |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I know you've been a member for a month now, but as this is your first poem here in Open, I'd like to welcome you to the family! Please check your email for a special message.  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
great poem....I too am in a similar situation and let me tell you IT GOT BAD.....my advice...do what is right for everyone concerned....but most of all be true to YOU! Good writing.....Julie |
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Damsal New Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 7 |
You've expressed your feelings well here - Nice piece of work... As for content and theme - my suggestion, crass as it may seem, would be to envision yourself as one of those "two" you write of - How much would you enjoy being one of your counterparts? Does that make your decisions any easier? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
'as not long ago I swore Not to be here again' 'Will I make the same decision Again' 'A game sometimes no one wins' 'Alone I sit' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Mystical Nights! Wow, what a first post ... so many questions, so few answers. The heart holds the decisions. Hope you find the answers you seek. You've expressed this very well! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MysticalNights~ Welcome! Sorry to say, I don't think anyone here has an answer for you.... it must come from your heart. Hard place to be in...... I hope it all works out for the best. -SEA |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Thank you all for your kind words and advice. I have really enjoyed all the reading I have done here at passions, and it was you all that inspired me to want to try wirting poetry myself. This is my first poem. What a sad beginning.. LOL But if not for a friend's persuasion, it would not be here. So all the credit for the post goes out to her. Thank you all again! And yes...a very hard decision indeed... MysticalNights |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions...the posting part Your poem asks some difficult questions that only you can answer, of course I'm sure you already knew that  Hopefully through writing you can unlock the answer that you are looking for. Thank you for sharing this piece. |
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