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louisianasweetie
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 9
Metairie, Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2000-07-25 06:39 AM


You were the one that I have waited for all my life.
I was so much in love
Then everything changed
You, me, our feelings

The way we held eachother,
it just wasn't the same anymore
I couldn't understand how
I thought you were the one for me forever

Everything we went through
All the good times,
the bad times,
Why'd you have to hurt me so bad?

I thought you were the one to teach me love, happiness, and how a relationship is supposed to be.

All you taught me was never to trust anyone until you're sure that they are the one!


© Copyright 2000 Sarah Hodges - All Rights Reserved
ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

1 posted 2000-07-25 09:28 AM


a sad case of mistaken identity ... these are the toughest to write ... well done louisianasweetie ...
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