Open Poetry #8 |
I Might Be - a poem for a girl I haven't met yet |
bergmanb New Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 2 |
I MIGHT BE by Buddy Bergman I might be the guy you're thinking about the guy you want the guy you can't live without I might be the one who cheers you up who cooks you dinner and brings coffee when you wake up I might be the one who whispers in your ear tells you sweet nothings and says " I love you dear " It could be me that you call at night when you can't sleep or when you're in fright If you want someone to hold you at any time of day give me a quick call and i'm on my way I sit here thinking about what it's like to be your blanket and hold you tight It's an interesting thing to think of such things it moves my heart and makes it sing I get sort of giddy in this state of mind thinking about that girl i'm longing to find If it's supposed to be you and I still don't know then let me have a sign so then i'll know Now i say goodbye to you as the day goes past and look forward to my dreams where you'll always last I think this is it It's what its all about this strange new feeling that i can't live without I hope it gets stronger through each days endeavor and leads me to say "I love you forever" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great start Buddy! That is a very unified and well timed flow of words you posted. I love all the expressions of how things might be if you found your special love. I hope you can find someone to say I love you forever... Take care......ethome.. |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
I hope you find that special one. Good read...Keep writing! Gossamerwings ;) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey you have some good thoughts and desires here..hope you find that special one and she finds you...James |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Wow it REALLY is hard to type when the tears have completely clouded up your eyes!!!! What am awesome poem...I am a bit surprised because I just posted a VERY similar poem today (all about my "dream guy") in the Corner Pub..... This is a GREAT poem!!!! ---beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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bergmanb New Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 2 |
Thanks guys, your words are much appreciated. ) |
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