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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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 today I moved, I left one screen exchanged the blue for 'nother scene clouds in layers, way up high another view, of blue, in sky lying back, closed my mind where I tried, some peace to find I rode the breeze, shut out the world felt warmly blushed, by thoughts unfurled it's you I saw, a shadow clear closer coming, walking near long, slow steps, your hand reached out to touch my soul, my heart, no doubt desires mine, as I too, tried with outstretched hands, and tears, I cried, "I'm waiting here, can't your eyes feel the heat, the warmth, the love, the real" and just as words from lips escaped a noise in sky zoomed loud, awake it did me out, from dreams of you as planes I saw maneuver, two and spin and dip and watched, in awe tried to capture in their fall then quickly gone, as they had come the peace came back though dream was done but softly came another breeze slipped back to dreamland, with an ease to finish thoughts of fantasy a gentle kiss , from you to me and sinful touch, desires met I floated high, on clouds and yet another sound, called out to me my heart was pounding, for you see I turned around, I seemed to feel the touch, the kiss, the sin was real saw next to me, placed on the ground was rose, so red, with ribbon bound attached a note, my eyes to view with words of share, to me from you "Here lay two roses, blooms yet to unfold One is a treasure, the other is gold Awaiting the tender to open expand Longingly, both need a warm, guiding hand Almost perfection, in life yet untold Here lay two roses, blooms yet to unfold." M |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A beauty!!!  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Thank you Mark..lying out under the sky brings such a peace when it's needed ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen, Ahhhh, two roses, this is the best, with so many meanings. I'm glad that I stopped be and read this poem of yours. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill ..I am glad you did also, thank you ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A well crafted poem that tells a story. Enjoy it Gloom |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
hmmm don't you just love a crafty story Mr. Bloom...darn I meant to say Gloom but in the darkness I typed Bloom and rather like that...please don't take offense ok? just an off day in my off way in saying thanks ~~softly grimmacing Maureen |
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