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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-07-24 08:50 AM


For more than a century this frame
Captures the innocence of my youth
And though I no longer have a name
Time cannot take away the truth
I've fought so many battles in this bloody war
I can't recall what it is that I am fighting for

This rifle is an extension of my being
The dark side of my soul I never knew
And it does me good not ever seeing
The atrocities that I do
Now as I pose for this picture at the close of this war
Brother versus brother not so innocent anymore



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-24-2000).]

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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
1 posted 2000-07-24 10:07 AM


You the man, Walt, you the MAN!

Corinne

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-07-24 11:54 AM


Like the old folk song says...where have all the soldiers gone? gone to graveyards everyone..when will we ever learn? no one benefits when young men die


never say never

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-07-24 12:05 PM


Have to agree with Paula on this one.
Great poem to bring out the end of the innocence (Don Henley) and how it gets captured.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2000-07-24 12:06 PM


...and yet...watching the Marine Drum and Bugle Corps and the Marine Corps Silent Drill Team this weekend, in honor of our Veterans of the Korean War...and to see the crowds who have not forgotten...

I cannot say we were right, neither can I say we were wrong...

so all I can say is Thank You, for serving, for giving us one more opportunity to keep our freedom...

that is all I can say...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2000-07-24 12:15 PM


I know now what WayOutWalt stands for... WOW...

Excellent poem here...

regards,
sudhir

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