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Easy to Please
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Easy to Please |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Easy to Please I don’t ask for much, Just the shade of an oak A steady cool breeze With white water view. Yellow roses without thorns Jasmine in the air Blooming in snow My vase always full. Better than reality Dreamlike in appeal All the time mine A mix of sun and rain. What’s in it for you? Lemonade beneath the oak My fan for your breeze Waves soothing senses. Petals on the linens Flurries to follow A mystery to solve Fantasies to fulfill. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Oh, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Just right, I'd say ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like a real bargain for both parties. I love the thoughts......  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes---you don't ask for much...and your words are my pleasure..thanks! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, Marge, Balladeer and Martie! Corinne |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
you might just cause a world shortage of yellow roses ... how big's your vase? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Corinne! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Not asking much.........but it was definately enough~ Beautiful writing! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, very lovely sweet poet, and really not too much to ask for. This would be a most welcome ask for scene, especially the last verse. Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not much is definitely enough. This is so sweet. Great read |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Perfect... Very beautiful poetry... Corinne... regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Rex, Denise, Butterflies, Park, Mark and Sudhir! Sappy poem, though, eh? Must be time for something dark and brooding again. Corinne |
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