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I Am With You
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I Am With You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'd like to leave you with a gift, I wish you find it waiting here. I want to mend your heart bereft. Cease your trembling, calm your fear. You should know, you call on me. Always always, I am yours... I'll be your breeze, eternal sea, I'll hold each key, for all locked doors... for every heartbeat evermore, my heart beats thrice, I'll love you more... and everytime you wonder when, I'll keep you close, I'll be your friend... and every time you back away, I'll let you go, and wish you stay... every tear that you might cry, I'll kiss away till eyes run dry... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... You are the blue that colors sky, wistful in release of sigh, you are the green that paints the leaves, you are the you that sings in me... you are golden in the sun, and silver moon as day is done... twinkling starshine down from sky answer to the question, why? And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
How enchanting, how romantic... serenity, this is just too lovely... regards, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
serenity-you have no idea how this hits home. Your words have reached this soul and added a little sunlight within. This is so lovely and tender and the sensuality of the purest of love really shines through. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh im gettin ready to say it so duck---this is sennerific!! |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Serenity, I never cease to be awed by the work I find here. Your poem is beautiful! I'll love you more... and everytime you wonder when, I'll keep you close, I'll be your friend... and every time you back away, I'll let you go, and wish you stay... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll hold each key, for all locked doors... for every heartbeat evermore, my heart beats thrice, I'll love you more... and everytime you wonder when, I'll keep you close, I'll be your friend... and every time you back away, I'll let you go, and wish you stay... every tear that you might cry, I'll kiss away till eyes run dry... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... ================= you are the you that sings in me... you are golden in the sun, and silver moon as day is done... twinkling starshine down from sky answer to the question, why? And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you. =============== my my my ... enchanting...yes this lil gem was kissed by cherubs as it passed thru the clouds... heaven sent me twin ... heaven bound as well  such grace...absolutely perfect *kiss kiss* me loves ya for this one me |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a lovely pledge of friendship hope and love never say never |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, was just a something for a friend who is having a rough day, today...(ET phone home...) am worried... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Nothing sweeter than offering your love to a friend...beautiul work Miss Serenity, your giving heart shines in this piece~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
we should all have bad days, if to receive such words of comfort and calm ... thanks serenity ... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, this was just lovely. It came across to be as a pledge to oneself, also. Very very nice.  Parker |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I think this is one of the finest poems I have read yet !! It's beautiful! So beautiful! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Absolutely breathtaking Very nice Serenity I need to find more time to read Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you butterflies...making me smile again...and mark, what was a lovely thing for you to say...and thank you parker, my missing maritime friend, and rich, you should find time to write more too...Thank you all...for taking the time to read and reply...it does mean much to me...--And sweet Saun...how could I forget you? Thank you. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,what a beautiful poem! I liked it very much!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd!  this is beautiful |
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