Open Poetry #8 |
No Shame |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Can you come out tonight? Play with me under the moonlight? Can you feel me breathing you in? Tell me this isn't a sin... Can you hear my thoughts racing of you? Are you ready for what I want to do? Do you want to get know me better? Do you feel what I feel? When we're together? Does the night get you lonely? As it does me? Suffering in silence Needing to be free Does the morning sun Bring you back to reality? Do you know all I am offering is me? Do you think you could Stay all night? Get carried away into the twilight Does she know? Does she know that's it's me? Will she ever set you free? Does she care what your doing till dawn? Did she tell you that's she's long gone? If I lend you my house key Will you come to me? When the nights get cold and lonely? Stirring desires awakened by the night, Desires that are too strong to fight Forgive me if I'm out of line I'm just working on making you mine Do you remember how it started? Couldn't believe you standing there staring at me A smile playing on your lips Me, on the dance floor shaking my hips Daring you to say what's on your mind I could tell your the flirtatious kind Can you say your happy? Can you dare to try to be? Can you hear me calling your name? Can we do this with no shame? < !signature--> Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
"Can we do this with no shame?" love bears no shame...its not an emotion you ask for it just is. never say never |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
This is great...I love the way it flows. Ever write any songs? Tony |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
JulieAnn.... This was great reading...I agree with Tony about the songs............ I like this one!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Wonderful work here. Have pondered many of your questions myself. Loved the read! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Paula~~~ Tahnk you for the reply.....but what if it isn't love??/ Or even emotions....Just having fun???? Tony~~~I have written a few songs....I love music and sngs are an interest of mine....I do have a couple posted here.....Thank oyu for the reply...... Thanks Sunny~~~ You are too kind.... MN~~~I love your work so I appreciate your reply~~Thank you..... < !signature--> Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good questions |
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