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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-24 01:21 AM


My life packed in a suitcase
at the foot of my mothers bed
I think of us tonight
as I rest my weary head
though you are lying close to me
I feel thousands of miles away
you ask me to come back with you
but I know I'd never stay

So my mind drifts off
to what lies ahead
to scared to move forward
it's lonliness I dread

I pour my heart out to strangers
the web is my escape
strangers who may have answers
for none do I have yet....

I love you still
you love me
though we both know
it's not that easy

The anger, the bitterness
the late night tears
grew a space between us
over those many years

You kiss me tenderly
for one last time
please don't touch me like that
I can't change my mind

Too many harsh words spoken
no time for amends
so my love go in peace
and please remain my friend...

< !signature-->

Julie  




[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-24-2000).]

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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
1 posted 2000-07-25 03:24 PM


it's always nice to be able to remain friends even if having to leave one another
~~softly
Maureen

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-07-25 04:07 PM


Well said JulieAnn.Things get complicated but friendship will remain. But I believe love is not complicated.Its the people with misconception and false ego make it complicated.
Sincerely
A_L

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-07-25 04:19 PM


Very good Julie I think it's so important to remain friends....well written.
JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
4 posted 2000-07-28 11:31 AM


Thank you A_L I agree with you.....But marriage is very complicated unless you find your soul mate if there is such a thing hmmmmmm......  

Thanks ethome.....I hope friendship finds us....It is important!!!   < !signature-->

Julie  




[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-28-2000).]

T McCoy
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 186

5 posted 2000-07-28 12:21 PM


  Julie...WOW...i'm glad I saw this...you're 2 for 2 on my score sheet (haha)...
I really like your style...it's soooo easy to read and relate too,  and,  oh yes,  soul mates are for real.  You'll find him.......
most likely when you're not even looking.

                   Tony

the ones who don't do anything are always the ones who try to put you down - Henry Rollins

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2005-04-22 07:53 PM


this is just precious
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