Open Poetry #8 |
Sockies On My Feet |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
This poem was written for a very special person that is so very dear to my heart. If you happen to stop by for a read, I sincerely hope that you enjoy this humorous little write that I have put together. Thank all of you so much, Bill Charles “SOCKIES ON MY FEET” “Honey, I know it’s springtime, But the rain is coming down in sheets. And it’s so cold and damp in here, That’s why I put “Sockies” on my feet”! Now summer has arrived with a heat wave, The air conditioner strained, and never missed a beat. “And honey, it’s really, really, cold in here, That’s why I put “Sockies” on my feet”! Fall snuck in, and I didn’t even notice, It didn’t feel like we had any heat. “Honey, I was really chilly when we went to bed, That’s why I put “Sockies” on my feet”! Winter blasted into town with a cold wind, It was icy just like last year, was it going to repeat? Anyway I said, “Honey, I’m really freezing, That’s why I put “Sockies” on my feet”! So, we went to bed that cold winter night, Whoopie Doo, I was promised a real treat! I rolled over and when I embraced her, She started putting “Sockies” on my feet! Bill Charles 7/23/00 4:41 PM |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This was really cute. Reminded me of myself because I always wear socks no matter the weather. I just loved this. It was unusual and made me smile. thanks for posting it! Kathleen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Irish Rose, Thank you for stopping bye. I really enjoyed writing this and one of my first tries at a little humor. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill.....This was a wonderful read!!!!!!! You have a great sense of humor, and it comes through here....... I loved every word!!!!! (Just be glad that she didn't bundle you up in long-johns!! (Ha!! Ha!!) Keep writing, Bill, don't ever stop!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
god this made me laugh so...thanks Loved the imagery...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Really cute Bill I could feel a twist coming and there it was ..she put sockies on my feet. Great fun I really enjoyed! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
If your feet are happy then all's right with the world...Loved the poem! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL....the title drew me in..the poem kept me here..now, I'll vote to make the cycle complete. Thanks for the smile! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ How could you have possibly known of my litle 'sockie' needs ? This is delightfully endearing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Thanks for the comments. I always look forward to them. Just wanted to try something a little different. As long as I can function, I'll always enjoy writing something. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
tracie66, I'm glad that I could make you laugh with this little humerous poem of mine. Thanks for the kind comments. ethome, I was sitting there trying to figure out a little twist, and came up with the last line. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Martie I agree, if your feet are nice and warm, then so is your heart. Thanks for the kind comments. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poet deVine Thanks for stopping by to read my humble little tale of humor. And also, thanks very much for your vote. And, you are so very welcome. Marge, I think that it was because I was on a certain wavelength, and sensed that you had a "Sockie" need! I think that is how I knew. Thank you for coming by, and for your kind comments. I always look forward to what you have to say about my writings. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Laughing a hearty one this morn thanks to you. This was real cute and your humor is refreshing. Love it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mark, I believe that this is really the first humorous write that I have done. I had this inspiration yesterday down at the river, and this is what happened. Thank you for stopping by to read it, and for your great comments. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
oh Im laughing laughing...this is me...sockies on my feet never say never |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula, Oh my goodness, you too with "Sockies On Your Feet"? I'm glad that I could put a little chuckle into your day. Thank you for the comments. |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Well, this being my first venture into this forum, I have to say that this was quite humorous. Your title drew me in and it is quite funny how universal sockies are. Kind of like the towel in "hitchhikers guide to the galaxie." This was really great keep it up. Jason Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Great sense of humor. I am not a 'sockies person' but I have known some very sweet men that were! Cute read!! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jacman, Thank you for stopping by and commenting on this little humoruous write that I have done. Thanks again. Gossamerwings, Thanks for the kind comments. Stop by again. |
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