Open Poetry #8 |
Loves' Promise |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There's got to be rain to make a rainbow There's always dark before the dawn Even with a lovely rose you get a sharpened thorn. So why should love be different? You take the bitter with the sweet Building stronger ties between you With each demon you defeat. Loves promise is never easy So take time to make it last Just make your steps be in the right direction Thats all anyone can ask. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.. You spoke mountains here, and all of it the truth!!! "..take time to make it last.." Anything worth having takes work, including and especially a good relationship!!!! I really liked this one!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Paula, excellent poem. Very moving. It really touched me. Thanks for sharing,Juls |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Paula ... these are excellent grounds for a lasting relationship very nicely written |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good advice here Paula. "Even with a lovely rose you get a sharpened thorn so why should love be different? you take the bitter with the sweet Building stronger ties between you With each demon you defeat." For better or worse, according to the old style vows. They certainly fit in here with your words of wisdom. "love's promise is never easy So take time to make it last." So true, take time and let love grow deeper, patience and understanding become a big part of the whole picture. Good writing! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny1...thanks so much for all your good thoughts...you always keep me going Juls...thank you I am glad you found your way to our site and I am looking forward to reading you soon Rex...thank you...there has to be some goals or you never strive right? ethome...I BELIEVE in those old style vows...that is how love should be never say never |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula, This flowed so well, from one verse to the next. I liked it, and thanks for writing it. |
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