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The Beauty Of Your Eyes
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The Beauty Of Your Eyes |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~THE BEAUTY OF YOUR EYES~ For a moment, I close my eyes and get lost in your love, the softness of your lips brushes against mine, your fingers run through my flowing hair, the warmth of your breath cascades over my face, bringing it to life with the flame of your touch, you tenderly kiss my eyelashes and sigh seductively in my ear, like an artist, your fingers outline the smile you've put on my face and gently caresses my every emotion, I open my eyes and allow them to slowly meet your captivating brown eyes, my heart dances in the wonder of you, in love with all that you are, basking in the light of romance, entranced by the beauty of your eyes *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Melissa, this is beautiful as usual. Your works are always so descriptive. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Melissa, Goodness, you certainly have a way of expressing yourself. I liked!!!!!!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How lovely the smile on your face...it always amazes me the emotions you seem to find in myself that I thought were lost. I love your work. never say never |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Oh, how softly this flows~ 'like an artist, your fingers outline the smile you've put on my face' Wow .... lovely thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice Melissa. I like your gentleness to this piece. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow Melissa, this is wonderful. . . I love the phrases that you've used here. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
SIGH Melissa, well you really have done it this time. Stole my breath sigh again this could be nothing but beautiful. yOur words shine. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
soft smooth beauty you have penned. Great write.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for your wonderful replies! What else can I say except that experience writes the best poetry  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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