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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-23 09:22 AM



          Take me to the edge of time......
   To a place that knows no ticking of a clock..
   There's no hurried rush to be somewhere..
   There's no hurried, worried care..
          Take me to the edge of time......
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          Take me to the edge of time......
   Let me lie peaceful at your side..
   Where love and joy are free to grow..
   Where we can let our spirits glow..
          Take me to the edge of time......
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          Take me to the edge of time......
   To a place that knows no pain..
   A place where sorrow cannot live..
   A place where love is ours to give..
          Take me to the edge of time......
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          Take me to the edge of time......
   Where we will hold onto our dreams..
   Forever means it will not end..
   Forever lovers....forever friends..
          Take me to the edge of time......


Love received is equal to love given!


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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-07-23 09:23 AM


Sunny, this is a lovely poem to read...

well done!

K

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-07-23 09:39 AM


Sunny,
Very nicely done, I enjoyed reading it. "The edge of time", what a beautiful thought. I wonder where it is, and perhaps how I might journey there?

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-23 09:40 AM


Severn.....
         Thank you so much! I'm glad you
    enjoyed this one....< !signature-->

Love received is equal to love given!



[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-23-2000).]

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2000-07-23 09:44 AM


Bill...
      I'm glad you enjoyed this, also.....
        (This is a journey meant for two..)

           Thank you so much!!


Love received is equal to love given!


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 2000-07-23 08:08 PM


Very beautifully done, Sunny!  

Denise

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2000-07-23 08:22 PM


Denise....

        Thank you for reading this....
     I always enjoy hearing from you....


Love received is equal to love given!


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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7 posted 2004-05-23 10:30 PM


ooooooo, I love this format!
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