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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Angelically aMusing My Angel stands in sunshine I cannot see her there I only know I'm safe and warm and wrapped up in her care. My Angel is all knowing but lets me trip and fall only when in most dire straits does she then take on my call. My Angel has a sense of humor and Muse is thus her twin the two of them are heavenly and my heart reside within. Sometimes when one is speaking the other wants to go on chatting my mind a whirlwind cage of words so many of them go unheard! And when my Muse gets out of hand my Angel is there to take a stand to keep priority on the narrow but with verbiage like an arrow takes a thought, a word, a whim to the center of your heart within and keeps me in your memory close like a dear and friendly sort of ghost. So if you have an Angel too or perhaps just an angelic Muse keep them happy with your essence so that we will always have your presence. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 22 July 2000 Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi Sunshine ... i liked this much (your rhyming pattern caught me off guard in the middle though) ... nice piece |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, Don't forget to take care of the angel, as it will take care of you. You have expressed this in this poem very well. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
MA, I didn't like the middle either...but it was too cute to put away, thanks... Bill, thanks for coming in to read! Glad you enjoyed... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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