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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-Feel- i can not see the pain on your face...but i can feel it from this place i can not wipe away your tears...but i feel them when you speak of your fears i can not see when you are so upset...but when we speak i certainly feel it i can not hear you cursing the night & all the things you say...but i feel it when we don't speak on those days i can not see the lost feeling that lingers around you...but i feel the same despair as you do i can not see, hear, or know all from this place i stand...but i feel all of your fears, hopes, & heartaches...i feel them all my love...I truly can I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very kind understanding lines in this poem Holly. The depth of your love really shows within this work. I really ejoyed the read. Take care..........ethome.......... |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Thank you..I'm happy to hear the depth of my love shows here, because it came from the heart.  Thanks for reading and replying. love & all, -Holly |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wow Holly, What feelings that you have within. Truly touching from the heart. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Empathy, or feeling what others feel, is a wonderful gift..I like your poem!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow, that is some heart you have there. No doubt left here as to the size and strength of the love you possess within. Great write and powerful from the word go. |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Holly... Excellent work as always. I love this. Packed full of love and understanding you can really "feel". What a connection you two must have... |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Mystical- Thanks so much! Yes, it is a real & true connection. I'm sure you know all about those kind.  It's a amazing kind of connection, out of the blue, never expected it, & now it's complicated...but still there, maybe even more than ever.  love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
a beautiful spirit shining through here...someone is lucky to know you like this...softly spoken and well said. |
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