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Bring Back The Night
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Bring Back The Night |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Bring Back The Night ~*Marge Tindal*~ Bring back the night when you held me Surrounded in your charms Memories-in-the-making secure in the strength of your arms Infinite memories cascading held in the rapture of twinkling light Take me far beyond tomorrow but, kindly bring back the night The sunlight rays reflecting intensify with might Sweet memories of soft recalling my need to swallow the night Surrender me to the velvet skies borne on wings of a lover's sigh Take from me what you might but please, bring back the night ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge- you have outdone yourself with this one. It is screaming so loud to me. Great write. What's next? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Memories-in-the-making secure in the strength of your arms" Mmmmmm, sigh ... sounds like you've got some delectable memories Marge! Beautiful verse!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You're so sweet. It just fell to my inkwell as my morning was interrupted with the sunrise. Just wanted to recall the night to hold me a little longer. Thank you ... there's always a 'next' ! Kit~ Yeah ...... wanted to slumber longer in those sweet recalls. Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge another great one! "Surrender me to the velvet skies borne on wings of a lover's sigh take from me what you might but please, bring back the night." You are such a great romantic poet Marge. Wonderful lines these and a great title. So well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thanks for the reply. Yes ... I guess this 'romantic' heart beats for all lovers to find some precious memory to recall. I believe that all poetry is 'romantic' in nature as it comes from the heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marge, this is really lovely and you have beautiful imagery here. Sometimes the dream makes the night worthwhile.  |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Love the night and all the wonderful journeys it takes us on. Beautiful poem Marge. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
you touch lovers and lovers to be everywhere with this one Marge...hold the night a little closer against the coming of the day. never say never |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Thank you for such a sweet reply. Eloise~ It's always so nice to see you in here. Thank you for reading and liking. Paula~ Ahhhh ! The night knows my name for sure ! I enjoy sharing with others. Thank you for letting me know you enjoy it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge...looks like you and I both love the night...and I love you poem, and you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ My little 'coasty' sister ..... the night offers so much delight to us both. Why - of course - it must run in the family !  Love ya, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've seen this side of you before, but different words offer different insight... How will I ever do as well as you? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks for taking another look at that 'romantic' side of me. I can't answer a question that I don't believe exists, my dear ... so I will humbly thank you for the compliment. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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