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The Ballad of Ceres
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The Ballad of Ceres |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
The Ballad of Ceres Upon a day, a while ago A sweet Ceres was born A man named Ron created her He called her his "firstborn" Computer Techno Poetry Became their passion one To sleep they hardly ever go Not 'til all jobs are done At first she had some growing pains With master CD-Ron But quickly learned how to back-up And problems soon were gone She doesn't fish for compliments She rather has a worm A good wild race with "Trojan horse" She loves to make them squirm A cold, it doesn't bother her Ceres is virus proof Whatever virus does approach She finds them all a spoof From time to time she bytes a bit But that's just puberty She wants to lose her heart disk drive Feel software ecstasy To surf the world of cyberspace The world she most admires Linked to computers lost in space A Giga great desire To surf where none have surfed before Seek for the hackers nest And bug them in their secret home Would give her mem'ry rest But when time comes to do the job She's like a sorceress She's always there where she belongs She's just a sweet Ceres Munda  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ This is just a brillant little piece. Ron will LOVE it ... as I do ! I've come to think of Ceres with great affection. You just did a splendid job with this ! !  I'm impressed with your thoughtfulness and your talent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very cool!!! I love this insight to our beloved Ceres!! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is great!!!! Passions is a feat... K |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thanks guys. I must admit Ceres is quite an inspiration. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ROFL...and Chris is sending her flowers as well... Best I read the sequel now...*g*HUGS |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my goodness Cindy....that's why she's sneezing ! and I read in announcements she has PMS too !  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ROFL Munda, but I thought ALL women suffered from Post-operative Male Syndrome....*g* Buy hey, Least Ceres got flowers...LOL HUGS |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Munda, great stuff LOL loved this why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
PMS too??? Poor Misunderstood Server... !!.. [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Too cute!  Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hehe guys....YOU are all too cute. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I loved the structure, style and flow of the poem and found it to be great fun. But I can only guess from the comments that you are talking about Passion's server. There are things I have'nt learned about the place yet. I have done some roaming and I realize this is a huge web site. I have to say it's got class too! |
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